AdjectiveNoun's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{sPhly} - Strings [WIP/DEMO]]

owww too loud

open up this MP3 in audacity, and then in FL Studio, fix all the places where it clips.

Shoephly responds:

wasn't the feedback i was asking for but sure, the clipping is because of my crappy as laptop. And "owww to loud" is a pretty useless... let's say; statement, there is a volume control on your computer you know? o.o

but thanks for the review nevertheless, just need to work on the quality. :)

[Bacon Factory (W.I.P)]

Nice amen breaks and reese basses

Those are two things I could never get the hang of

I don't really like the reverb on the hats though

yeajimmiboi responds:

Thanks man! You a fellow Reason user? I'm glad you like it mate. Thanks for commenting :)

[Sessions]

Very nice sounds

Pretty cool tempo change at the start. I didn't dig the stereo separation on the synths at the very start though. Also, the mix is altogether too loud, and a lot of things need to be taken down in volume.

You didn't really write anything past the first 30 seconds though, so I can't say I was kept entertained for more than that long.

Euphy responds:

Yes it was sooooo loud

But thanks man!

[Mariconda -Così Labile rmx edi]

finally a good track on Newgrounds with guitars

Very well produced, the singing and production was fantastic, it's a crying shame that this rock/trance/latin?!? piece of music has such a low score. Downloaded, fav'd.

OH35 responds:

Thanks!!! By the way, the lyrics are in italian. :-)

[Hooded Fate (KH2 Roxas Remix)]

Not a fan of the FL presets

The piano, synths, and ESPECIALLY guitar all sounded pretty bad. Still, you've got some compositional ability and to some extent seem to know your way around the program.

I would have given you an 8, but you didn't right this, or even get all of the notes right, so I took off another two points.

echoraid-remixes responds:

Yeah, i'm looking around for a better sound card aswell as some higher quality samples. Thing is, I haven't got exactly enough money to spare on the profesional samples haha, but I'm getting there. Thank you for the advice :)

[Freeloader {Dj-Abbic remix}]

Listen to more house

This had a lot of trance elements, but even those weren't very strong.

It took a very long time for the kick to drop in.

Also, you heavily sidechained the crowd noise with the kick. That just sounds awful. As a matter of fact, you sidechained everything a lot. This mix is simply way too loud. You need to bring the volume down on almost everything, and avoid using limiter tools on the master channel.

DjAbbic responds:

Heh, to be honest, I know for a fact that this isn't house. It's just that the trance section is full of noobs who want dance music/all-happy music and vote 0 if they don't get that. The sidechained crowd noise, I thought it sounded cool :P. I guess everyone is entitled to their opinions, and all the sidechaining is because it was too loud, but too soft with sidechaining, so I made the mix a bit louder than normal. Thanks for the honest and constructive review.

[Welcome to My World]

dear god

I just heard this on NG radio

what in god's name were you thinking